Tuesday, 26 September 2017

First Cut feedback

Positives 
  • People liked the mix of narrative and performance understanding we did this because its a common convention in script music videos
  • Some said they liked the fact there was no link with the boy and girl because it was easier to understand.
  • Most of our class wanted to see the boy win the race, (which we are now going to do for certain).
  • Peers felt it was better with the boy kept to his split screen and the girl on hers.
Negatives
  • Show more of the main singer because its conventional in most pop videos to show the main band member.
  • Some shots had bad angles that looked amateur.
  • One particular shot of the boy putting his hand on the camera could be faded to the stranger stealing the girls money.

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