First Cut Feedback Interview

Interview from Daniel Lomax, 17 year old, media student

First Cut feedback

Positives 

• People liked the mix of narrative and performance understanding we did this because its a common convention in script music videos
• Some said they liked the fact there was no link with the boy and girl because it was easier to understand.
• Most of our class wanted to see the boy win the race, (which we are now going to do for certain).
• Peers felt it was better with the boy kept to his split screen and the girl on hers.

Negatives

• Show more of the main singer because its conventional in most pop videos to show the main band member.
• Some shots had bad angles that looked amateur.
• One particular shot of the boy putting his hand on the camera could be faded to the stranger stealing the girls money.

Editing Update 3

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First Cut

Editing Decision

Editing Update 2

Editing Update 1

Filming Update Vlog 3